Pick One Thing and Jump In

Life has taken another twist, propelling me forward and on. That’s what happens when you have a dream (or goal) and work toward it. Even if only a little at a time.

Thinking my manuscript was “ready”, I attended the AtlantaWriting Workshop on February 20 to pitch to three (different) literary agents. Nothing came of that, but during the day’s sessions, my vague suspicion that the story could be better was confirmed.

After the eye-opening “First Page” panel, I cut the first five pages of Peace Makers, giving it a crisper, less background-intensive beginning and leaving more for the reader to discover. But like any remodel, the initial action creates a ton of related work. C’est la vie.

In the last session of the day, Chuck Sambuchino shared a list of things writers can do to feel in control (though we mostly are not), and told us to pick one thing and jump in with both feet. Then when that one is mastered, pick another.

As I would like to widen and broaden my author-platform (my reach, my network of readers and supporters), I chose Twitter.

When asked, half the room admitted to NOT having a Twitter presence, me included.

Chuck reminded us that TWITTER is where literary agents and editors hang out. Meaning a MECCA for unrepresented writers like me. It’s also a way to get the word out about my books, once published.

So, bored with Facebook, and itching to put Chuck’s advice to work, I decided to try Twitter again as my one thing. 

I am shocked and amazed, but I like it!

The pace is fast and brings a stream of fascinating people and topics, mostly of the artistic/literary ilk, any and all of whom are available for interaction, should I have the cajones. Three weeks in, I have 180ish followers with light participation. The more dedicated I am, the more people I meet, the more books, contests, music, you-name-it, I discover.

I like it. I love it. I want some more of it.

Incidentally, I find myself applying Chuck’s advice to life. I had been noodling a couple of business ventures, one for months, and after some agony (steeping), realized both pull me away from my passion, from writing. So the answer is no to both. I have a day-job, writing gets the rest of my attention. Pick one thing and jump in.

Is there something you have been dancing around, wishing and hoping for, dreaming of having or doing, but not getting any closer?

Pick one thing and jump in.

With both feet.

Then tell us about your adventures in the comments.

~ OJ Barré, Connect with me on Twitter!

Preparing to Pitch at a Writing Workshop

Six long years it has taken to write this book. This novel. This Fantasy. This Southern Literary Speculative Fantasy.

I’m going with Southern Fantasy for now.

On February 20^th, I (finally, finally, FINALLY!) get to pitch Blessed Are the Peace Makers at the Atlanta Writing Workshop, where I am confirmed with two agents and wait-listed for another.

Scattering Seeds aka Pitching Literary Agents

All three agents represent the Fantasy genre and all three sound awesome. Is one of them looking for me and for Peace Makers? Will one of them love William and Awen’s story as much as I?

In order to find out, it’s important I be prepared when the pitch-date rolls around. To this end, I searched our Relentless Writers Blog for helpful tips, then googled to find more on pitching at a conference.

These are the articles that helped the most:

The rules to follow before/when querying a manuscript, by Literary Agent, Mary C. Moore, including:

"Rule #6: Have your manuscript finished, edited, and polished before querying.
Reason: Although a lot of agents will do edits before shopping your manuscript, their time is limited. They are not going to be willing to do extensive edits on a project, so if you send out a manuscript before it is finished, you are essentially setting yourself up for rejection."

From Author, Chuck Sambuchino’s Tips for Pitching a Literary Agent at a Writers’ Conference:

I learned not to bring manuscript pages, to keep my pitch under 90 seconds (fiction) and that it’s okay to bring notes, but not to read from them (oh, and to be brilliant when sitting next to an agent at lunch, but not to pitch them there.)

From How to Pitch to an Agent at a Writers’ Conference, by Author, Kerrie Flanagan:

“Writers need to understand that agents attend conferences with the same high hopes that writers do. Writers want to find an agent who will represent them, and agents want to find clients who have a book they can get excited about. The agent/author relationship is that of a partnership where each party has the same goal in mind; to sell the book to a publishing house. 

Jon Sternfeld, with the Irene Goodman Agency said, ‘I wish writers would see the agents more as an equal—when there's too much desperation in the writer's eyes, agents tend to de-value them. If a writer is confident, I know that they don't need me so much as we need each other.’”

Am I there yet? Am I ready to pitch? Not quite. There are things I have left to do in the next two weeks:

 1)      Complete the last pass (3^rd Draft) of Blessed Are the Peace Makers;

2)      Hone my query letter and memorize it for my pitch;

3)      Write (and memorize) a few more one-line blurbs for chance-meetings of other agents (and interested writers) during the day-long workshop;

4)      Practice, practice, practice my pitch and one-liners;

5)      Do deeper research on the three agents I will be pitching – so far I’ve only found the standard bio on each of them (maybe because they are newer agents);

6)      Plan my outfit so that I look professional and feel great;

7)      Resolve to reap the other benefits of attending the workshop, whether I receive an agent request or not, courtesy of Author, Merissa McCain.

There you have it. Good luck on YOUR next pitch.

~ Olivia J. Herrell aka O.J. Barré

P.S. Or just skip the pitch altogether and go Agent, Janet Reid's route: Pitch Sessions Are the Spawn of Satan. Wish I'd read this before spending so much time and money.