Wednesday, February 4, 2015

Plotting VS Pantsing SMACKDOWN!


     Welcome to the my first SMACKDOWN! Today I want to take a look at the two processes of writing:

PLOTTING:
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and

PANTSING:


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Let our combatants duke it out!



PANTSING:

I want to start with pantsing because it's the process I'm most familiar with. That's right, I'm a pantser. Why? Pantsing seems easy, to begin with. There are minimal notes and not a whole lot of research. Pansting is, by definition, flying be the seat of your pants. In fact, Wikinano defines pantsing as this: Pantsing (also known as winging it) is the term Wrimos use refering to writing without a fixed outline (an outline that the writer will force themselves to follow). A Wrimo who adopts the pantsing approach to writing is called a pantser


Pantsing usually occurs when a character, or a plot, pulls at the writer and must be told. Sometimes it can come from a scene, or an ending that the author simply can't get out of their mind. That's how it works for me. I see a storyline, I find my ending and I simply have to write it. I may take a few notes along the way, post-it notes are my best friend, but it's characters and a world that calls so strongly that I don't feel like I have time to write a ton of notes or outlines.

I live in a structured world. My husband is very structured. He likes things in their proper places, at all times. He likes to know where we're going, when we're going and roughly how long we're going to be gone. That's great, in life that structure works. We're rarely late, and the house is in perfect order. I, on the other hand, by nature live in an organized chaos. I choose this on purpose. I don't often care for structure because life doesn't always go according to plan. Same with my writing. I don't want to micromanage my characters. I get enough of that in real life. I like them to be free. I want them to tell their own story in their own way, and it works, but it's not without its faults. Sometimes it opens huge plot holes and character discrepancies that have to be addressed during editing. 

Here are some of my tips on pantsing:

1. Know your genre- I think this is true of both plotting and pantsing. Know who you're writing for. If you think your writing for YA, but the character you're seeing is middle grade, your story is going to come out middle grade. Be aware ahead of time the group you're writing for and what style you're writing. It'll save you a lot of re-writes in the long run.

2. Know your setting- You had a vision of the ending scene of your story. Great. Now you have to figure out the important parts that you're going to need to go back to the story and tell it from the beginning. There are a few parts that every pantser needs to know in advance. Where is your story told? What time is it being told in? If the story starts in the south of France and moves to Kentucky without your character ever boarding a plane, you've got a problem and a lot of rewrites. As carefree as we want pantsing to be, there does need to be a little forethought. 

3. Know your characters- Do you need to write a big bubble outline of every character trait your MC has? I never have. I see the basics of my character. Blonde hair, blue eyes, maybe a little snarky or like Sherlock Holmes (the Robert Downey Jr. version). Great. Write those down. Most of the time your character will develope their own peronality as you write, but it helps to have a few notes so you don't forget, if you step away, that your character has minty green eyes and silvery lilac hair. 

4. Keep writing- This is tough because sometimes in pansting it's easy to get stuck on a plot hole. There are times where you want to take a step back, or when you have to take a step back and then you re-read and you think I hate all of this and want to erase it all and start over. Don't. Pantsing is really about editing. It's about getting the words out of your head and onto paper because your character is screaming to have his/or her story told. Don't stop writing. If you get stuck, skip ahead to a scene you are ready to write and come back, but don't re-read and re-write. Get it all out, then go back and make changes. Keep the momentum. 

You aren't alone. Nora Roberts said, "I never know where my story is going. I sit down at the computer to find out."

Point: Pantsing.
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PLOTTING:

By now you're probably thinking she's biased. She's a pantster and she chose Link (her favorite video game character) to represent pansting. How can she objectively look at plotting? 

Well, I've plotted. My first three complete manuscripts I pantsed, but the time finally came where I felt the need to plot. Plotting requires a lot of work. There are spreadsheets and color codings. Robison Wells posted a picture on facebook once of those big science poster boards with a crazy flow chart of arrows and colors for a novel he was working on. Holy Hannah. The thought of all of that work on top of writing and editing blows my mind, but it is often needed. There are a lot of people who have crazy schedules, who aren't stay at home mom's that can write when the kids take naps or go outside to play. A lot of authors have a job or two plus a household to run. Keeping track of a storyline can just add to the already piled workload. That's where plotting and outlining come in.

Plotting and outlining have great resources. Pinterest has helped when searching for the perfect look for a character, or a setting I couldn't quite see. Scrivener has a lot of tools to help take notes or keep track of ideas. Some prefer paper over computer programs. Old school bubble outlines are my preferred method, but whatever method you choose, plotting helps structure and keep organized while writing.

When plotting and outlining for my last ms, I noticed that I knew the ending. The characters had birthdates and astrological signs that pointed to personality traits. Settings weren't just a vision in my head but an actual place that I could research or tour and make notes along the way. I knew all of the plot structure so there was a lot less guessing and stepping away. Was it easier? I don't know. They both felt like they were easy and hard at times, but it was nice to have the notes ahead of time to go back to whenever I got stuck.

Here are a few of my tips for plotting:

1. Get a Pinterest account- I've already said it, but I want to say it again. Pinterest is incredibly helpful for envisioning characters and setting. Create a storyboard to post to. Identify the characters and who they are. Post pictures of outfits, houses, beautiful scenery and anything else that's going to help the story. Why? Because sometimes it's easier to picture if you can already see it. 

2. Find a program that works for you- Maybe Scrivener and Excel are the programs for you with spreadsheets and color coding. Maybe you prefer writing it out by hand with bubbles or bullets. Or maybe you're the kind of person who likes dozens of posterboards stretched out across the room with colors and lines and every point possibly in the ms. Doesn't matter so long as it works for you and don't get discouraged if  the first way you try doesn't work. Keep trying until you find the one that does.

3. Do your research- Plotting and outlining requires research. It's what makes plotting and outlining what they are. It helps the writing to run smoothly and allows the author to be able to step away for a while and come back knowing exactly where they were and where they were going. Plotting and outlining require discipline. Know your characters inside and out, know the world you're creating, know where your story is going. That's why outlining is useful and helps when life gets too busy or for people who just like structure. It may only be a line or two about the plot, but it keeps you on track. If research isn't your thing, try pantsing.   

A lot of well known authors are known for their plotting such as J.K. Rowling, Sylvia Plath and Norman Mailer.

Point: Plotting
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There is no right or wrong way. Pantsing may work for one story and not with another. Some people may always pants, others may always plot. Find what works for you. Experiment with both types and go with whatever feels more natural. Don't pick one because someone tells you it works better, or they wouldn't ever use the other. Just like every writer and every book, every process is different.
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Do you have a preferred method? Any other tips you'd like to share? Have opinions on my next smackdown? Leave them in the comments below and look for the next Relentless Writer's post Thursday!





21 comments:

  1. Great post! My son is a huge Link fan too. ;) I am a pantser at heart, but always wondered about the other side of the fence. Do you know of any good books on the subject that might help me get started?

    In gratitude,
    Marissa

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    1. Thanks Marissa! I read Million Dollar Outlines by David Farland and found it to be really helpful since I don't often outline.

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    2. Marissa - Save the Cat by Blake Snyder is a pretty good resource for plotting, too. He bases his stuff on the hero's journey (Joseph Campbell) and though he talks about writing screenplays, you can generalize his beat sheet to any kind of fiction.
      ;)

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    3. My agent told me to read Save the Cat, Liv. I may have to look into it.

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  2. Awesome post!!! I'm a pantser by nature, but I guess I do plot to a certain extent with Pinterest and a word doc I keep important ideas so I don't forget them. There's no right or wrong way to write. The important thing is to just keep writing, whatever your style. And I think most people evolve and incorporate a little from both worlds. Great job!!!

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    1. I fully agree with you, Janet. All that matters is finding what works for you and your story.

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  3. I agree with Janet - a little of both works best. I pretty much like to start with an outline, so I know where I'm going and how many words it's going to take me to get there. But even within that outline, there are pantsing moments, like last night when I had one of my main characters pinned to the road by a guy who had a knee in his back & a knife to his throat. Not a pretty moment...and for the life of me, I couldn't figure out what happened next. Therefore, pantsing. I know that eventually said hero needs to intercede when the bad guys try to blow everything to the heavens, and it makes intuitive sense that he's going to be running around doing stuff before the big bang, but nothing in my outline accounted for that knife to his throat. Poor Trevor...
    ;)

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    1. Thanks for the comment, Liv. That makes sense. I do find that I at least make a storyboard on pinterest for my mss.

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    2. Oh yeah, I love me some pinterest. Most of my big projects have boards, so if you ever read something of mine and want to know what I think the hero looks like, that's where you go.
      ;)

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    3. Oh yeah, I love me some pinterest. Most of my big projects have boards, so if you ever read something of mine and want to know what I think the hero looks like, that's where you go.
      ;)

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    4. Thanks for the comment, Liv. That makes sense. I do find that I at least make a storyboard on pinterest for my mss.

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  4. I'm pantsing my current novel and it's taking longer than my previous that I plotted. I may need to start plotting..,

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    1. I'm sorry Mary. You may be right. I had that happen with my first ms. I walked away and eventually had to go back and write notes so I could finish it.

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  5. I'm a mixture of both (or a plotser!). I can't write without an outline, but I use a general guideline that I adapt as I'm writing. Sometimes the ending turns out completely differently to how I planned, but it's always useful to have that initial guideline in place to keep me on track.

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    1. I like that idea, Emma. I may use it on my next ms. Thanks!

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  6. I've been mostly a pantser, though I do a lot of research. Book One of this trilogy was total pantsing, but for Book Two I knew where it was going, so I scribbled out a quick outline (to about three-quarters of the way through) and that's made a big difference. It feels like I'll have a lot less editing on the backend for Book Two. Enjoyed the article, Niki, thank you!

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  7. Thanks Olivia! I may try a quick outline for my next. It's nice to have something if you step away.

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  8. Hardcore plotter here...but as many like me are quick to point out - I leave just enough room for spontaneity and creative flow. Great topic! :)

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    1. Thank you! I definitely agree that you need to find a way that works for you.

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  9. Pantser! I can't do outlines for fiction. I tried. It's equivalent to staring at a wall at home - I fall asleep. LOL

    I make notes along the way so I don't forget things, or highlight items so I know I have to back reference, but for the most part - it comes out with the dirty laundry! lol

    Good stuff, Nikki!

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